Пример сочинения ЕГЭ на 25 баллов с реального экзамена

Публикую сочинение, написанное на реальном экзамене ЕГЭ в 2021 году моей ученицей Дарьей.

Эксперты оценили его в 24 балла из 25, снизив 1 балл за пунктуационные ошибки. Комментарий — 6 из 6.
***Ошибки, отмеченные экспертами: не хватает запятой в 3 абзаце после «словно живой» — завершение сравнительного оборота, в 6 абзаце (собственная позиция) нет запятой после «где ты вырос» — граница простого предложения в составе сложного.

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